Hello there! I’ve been writing a (terrible) shrink story over the past few weeks, and looking for feedback. It does require a lot of editing, but at least it’s down on the page, eh? https://archiveofourown.org/works/29010579/chapters/71345811 Here’s the link to the latest chapter if you want to see. 
Let me know what you think?
I’ve also got some vignettes that have been floating around for a while which I have never really developed, but will post in this thread. Please, do give feedback!
@crosyn https://archiveofourown.org/works/29010579/chapters/72408966 This is focused on shrinking, but will have more sexual stuff next time. Let me know what you think! I’m worried it’s a bit too…obvious, but hey ho.
@lil It’ll roll on for another few chapters, but need to actually write the story. Thanks tho 
Yeah, this is excellent. DnD and shrink stuff mix extremely well.
@littlenichole Writing the two completely opposite reactions (I do have to go over the rest of the story with a fine comb at some stage, as I think I mix up a name or two at some point!) was very fun! And yeah, that was my intention too when writing the pub scene. Consider it my Ode to the Pub. Thank you for the feedback!
She looked up at him, slightly terrified and yet filled with wonder. She had…dreamed? Wondered? Lusted? after this moment for years. She had loved the idea of shrinking for so long, and finally it had been achieved. A thrill ran through her, almost delirious at the new feelings that were running through her. Her knees almost gave way as she focused on him. He smiled.
“So, how does it feel to be… shrunken?” He laughed, his voice tinged with the same emotions that were running through hers at a million miles an hour. His face was so huge in comparison to her. She couldn’t have been more than… five inches tall? Maybe four? Everything loomed over her. A mug soared over her, and she didn’t even want to think how big the distance was between the table and the floor. The ceiling was so far away, it was almost the sky. The general debris on the desk scattered everywhere seemed like hilarious parodies of usual objects, being enormous to her. Yet, they were normal sized. SHE was the shrunken one. With all of these thought swimming in her head and thinking how to respond, she didn’t see him moving his hand in a general matter-of-fact manner in a way that collided with her by accident, forcing her onto her back with a tiny crash. She gasped in surprise and fragility. How did he not realise that he had to be more careful? He was so clumsy when they were the same size, and now she was shrunken… he really had to take extra care. With this in mind, and his increasingly frantic apologies, she looked him in his (enormous) eye, and grinned.
“It’s fucking hot.” she said in a sultry manner.
https://archiveofourown.org/works/29010579/chapters/73617177 Another chapter is done! Miraculous.