Posts made by Olo
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RE: At least the introduction here can be written by myself......
@blss You’re too good to go on Craigslist. He’ll get more for you on weeBabe.
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RE: Out of their Element
@littlest-lily I simply love hearing Evie’s inner monologue as she grapples with her new circumstances. That moment just before she puts herself in his hand, I want it to last forever.
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RE: Caught In Mid Air
@Mrgoblinging7 When I’m out hunting, I often throw off others’ suspicion by claiming to be a lepidopterist.
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RE: A Really Big Breakfast
@The-Big-G I think I can find a place for them on my food pyramid.
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RE: A bad experience activity
@blss Depends. Some retailers have been scaling back their Black Friday operations due to negative publicity, but now they want to ramp back up and are having a hard time finding staff. You could be stuck in a fulfillment center for days or weeks.
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RE: Out of their Element
@littlest-lily I really like the way you orient the reader to the action, enough detail to see what is going on but not so much as to slow everything down. Aiden’s interior narrative is complex and coherent, and Dr. Little’s reactions are plausible and not conveniently stupid. Aiden barely gets Evie out of there instead of being some sort of perfect action hero. He and Evie have a lot of discoveries ahead of them.
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RE: Palm Princess
@Mrgoblinging7 “Kidnapping”? Looks like someone tied her up for a sacrifice.
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RE: A bad experience activity
@blss Oh, this is all online. I can’t do anything until you’re delivered to my doorstep.
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RE: A bad experience activity
@blss There are no mistakes, only “happy accidents.”
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RE: A bad experience activity
@blss Good luck with that. They listed your photo and you’re already in my shopping cart.