Posts made by Olo

@littlest-lily Aiden is properly freaked out (and enchanted). I like how neither of them has a ready plan of action for this absurdly unforeseeable circumstance, but they are both mature enough to allow each other and themselves to have inconvenient and unhelpful emotions.

As someone who has had to improvise toilet facilities for hamster-sized women on multiple occasions, I am very intrigued by Dr. Little’s contraption, not least because I have no firm idea of what kind of life he anticipated for Evie (or whomever ended up being his test subject).

I keep thinking she looks like Maggie Gyllenhaal.

In his grip by Out-of-size

Whats-in-my-glass by Out-of-size

@blss You’re too good to go on Craigslist. He’ll get more for you on weeBabe.

@littlest-lily I simply love hearing Evie’s inner monologue as she grapples with her new circumstances. That moment just before she puts herself in his hand, I want it to last forever.

@Mrgoblinging7 I’ll froth her anytime.

@Mrgoblinging7 When I’m out hunting, I often throw off others’ suspicion by claiming to be a lepidopterist.

@The-Big-G I think I can find a place for them on my food pyramid.

A really big breakfast by Out-of-size

Tea Bath by Out-of-size

You-can-t-stir-the-coffee-while-I-take-a-bath by Out-of-size

@blss Depends. Some retailers have been scaling back their Black Friday operations due to negative publicity, but now they want to ramp back up and are having a hard time finding staff. You could be stuck in a fulfillment center for days or weeks.

@littlest-lily I really like the way you orient the reader to the action, enough detail to see what is going on but not so much as to slow everything down. Aiden’s interior narrative is complex and coherent, and Dr. Little’s reactions are plausible and not conveniently stupid. Aiden barely gets Evie out of there instead of being some sort of perfect action hero. He and Evie have a lot of discoveries ahead of them.

@Mrgoblinging7 “Kidnapping”? Looks like someone tied her up for a sacrifice.