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GEEZ. Talk about INJECTING moral platitudes into the system.

@giantmaneddie In all seriousness though, as a writer that’s written scene blocking and pacing, that could have been written better.

There was too much lapse in time through which she left the bed; went to the toilet; returned, to have carried the momentum through of her humiliation.

@olo That’s the perfect size.

Are we sure this is Photoshop? LOL

LOVE THIS

@olo Ah, ok. Well, plot twist: if I do see any sort of proposal in the legislature, I’ll ring the alarm bells.

I may be interested? I need to learn more, first.

The wires definitely crossed early in life; and the current began running through them, much later, around puberty, and that’s when the inklings of what I liked crystallized around my sexuality.

I’m an observer that enjoys watching macro/micro: the Escher painting, the impossible perspective (especially when the micro is transiting the macro’s innards) but if I had to identify with a sub-type, I would say I, myself, would absolutely prefer to be micro

@kisupure said in Petrichor - a novel in "open beta" - [M/f, minigiant, post-apocalyptic dystopia, slavery, military setting]:

@Nyx Thank you SO MUCH Nyx. I was told by someone else on another platform that the way I write is still very “purple”,

Christ. I must be maroon or something, then.

No; I love how you slice, dice, dissect the characters’ inner worlds. Don’t stop it. Don’t ever stop it. It’s a talent that’s woefully overlooked, I think. Too many people get praise for the heavy logistics of moving set pieces in a story (like Snyder); I would rather see their inner world, because painting that fearsomely, but believably, whilst still providing peripheral story and ongoing narrative without missing a beat? That’s talent.

I enjoy Gray and her inner musings. Don’t stop. I mean, entire literary empires have been erected on the inner-world premise ('hem, George RR Martin has entered the chat. And so does Stephen King of his older works, to be fair, we’re talking Lisey’s-Story-era).

Forget those idiots. They don’t know what they’re talking about.

However;
I’m going to use that from now on: “stylistic overwhelm.” Love it.

That is ridiculously hot