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@tiny-ivy I completely support this trend

@olo Those tinies are the perfect size for snacking

@tiny-ivy This was an excellent story

@green I’m loving this story

@kisupure More glimpses into Anakim society…I really like the small details that you include throughout the chapter (I’m guessing that the strange contraption that they attached to Rice was some sort of feeding tube or regeneration serum?) The fact that so many questions are unanswered — Rice’s motivations and background, for example — leave me eager for the next chapters.

P.S. I had to laugh when Gray describes the Western that she was reading because I’ve read so many books like that.

P.P.S. Giants carrying smaller people over their shoulder are the best.

@olo Unknown Hand created such fantastic M/f artwork

@kisupure You certainly know how to write size erotica well…that was so powerful and sensual It’s also fascinating to watch their relationship as it grows and to wonder what the consequences of that relationship will be.

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@Nyx Thank you SO MUCH Nyx. I was told by someone else on another platform that the way I write is still very “purple”, and I couldn’t quite wrap my head around that… I guess I like to take a scalpel to my characters’ inner lives and that’s considered egregiously descriptive in the normal lit world. Oh well, I’m lucky that kink readers like that sort of thing! (I’ve started calling it “stylistic overwhelm”.) And hope you enjoy more weirdness coming from characters on both sides of the war here soon.

I don’t think that your prose is purple at all…in fact, your style is one of the things that I like about your stories (besides the very large men, of course ). It flows well and it’s easy to immerse myself in your writing, and I would eagerly read any non-size fiction that you wrote. And honestly, I wish that more writers spent time on their characters’ inner lives. That’s part of the thrill for me as a reader, experiencing a character’s emotions and how they react to both mundane events and life-altering ones.

As for Chapter 6, I like how more mysteries were introduced, including the human-sized cigarettes (and whether there are humans living with or working with the Anakim). The fact that the sentinel is touch-starved was surprisingly heartbreaking, and I realized that both he and Gray are sort of outsiders. Gray seems to want to rebel in her own ways, including pocketing the cigarette and agreeing to a rendezvous with the sentinel, and I have to wonder if this behavior will eventually get her into deep trouble.

@kisupure When I saw that there were new chapters, I was very excited, and oh my god, they were fantastic. You write some of the best tension scenes in macro fiction and I find myself rereading certain parts just to savor all of the emotions. I mentioned this before but one of the things that I enjoy the most about this story is the gradual humanization of the Anakim. They go from being faceless monsters to complex beings with surprising motivations. Really good stuff!

@kisupure I loved Jack and Diane, and oh my gosh, I’m loving this full-length story so far. It’s not just the size difference parts, either (although those are extremely good); you’ve created a compelling story and a universe that feels very real and very engaging. There’s a gritty realism to the dystopia, and I like all of the little details that you’ve added to it. The idea of the Anakim’s fear-inducing pheromones is innovative and I hope that you explore it more.

I’ll admit that I’m curious about the significance of Signy and this person’s relationship to the Anakim. Were they a scientist, a soldier? As for the Anakim, I like how they’ve been given more human emotions and aspects in Gray’s eyes. The death scene with the Anakim and Gray was the right mixture of poignancy and power.

Anyway, I hope to read more, and if you decide to sell the finished story, I’d definitely buy it

@kisupure I really love the world that you created as well as the characters. It’s an excellent size story and an excellent sci-fi story. I’ll definitely be rereading this.

@kisupure I’m a huge fan of your work

I absolutely adore the concept and the drawings

I love clothing that conveys elegance and power, and giant men in suits make my heart melt. Armor is also very nice, and I like the idea of a giant knight casually scooping up a tiny person or two.

@green This is soooooo good