Best posts made by Olo

@SmolChlo You’ll behave yourself, right?

So many size kinks being born tonight.

Ktantan SW 002 by Ktantan

@taedis The question is, after a certain point, would that word even stop her?

@Giganto82

Yeah I hope she last through the full season.

This a real concern, because The Boys universe is more fatal to fan favorites than Game of Thrones.

That dbag that just used her then left is crazy if she did that for me I’d be like damn gf material.

First of all, acting like a dbag on a campus full of supes is asking to get your dick dissolved.

Second, Emma needs to get this shirt:

Ktantan SW 003 by Ktantan

This grabbed my attention from the start. We got a lot of good detail about Kimberly’s captivity, and I always appreciate tinies dwelling on their distress and inconveniences. More importantly, you’ve established Kimberly’s voice, which is crucial for us to care about what happens to her.

Another revealing aspect is how your dialogue is only half the conversation; the eye directions, facial expressions, and body language are at least as important as what is said. Being introduced to Kimberly in the box adds an important dimension to her reactions in the club. It’s a common device, but you use it well.

Aaron seems a right bastard, so it will be dismaying to see Kimberly fall into his clutches. More rewarding will being see her go through the contortions to accommodate her new reality.

Aaand we have fan-art!

Fun Size with Little Cricket by Bare-Faced-Cheek

@kisupure Collagers as talented as Ktantan have long intimidated me from giving it a go.

@kisupure You are really good at increasing the tension while keeping us focused on all the stakes. I also admire that for every mystery you remove (Sentinel’s got a crush!), you add another (why is the fear pheromone inconstant?). I also liked the detail of the local gentry having an embassy with Fox’s commander. So neo-feudal.

Gray lying to save her skin and put Kessler in the soup was cold. She better not wind up in the same foxhole with him later.

A little aerial recon would go a long way in this setting. Did I miss an explanation for its lack?

I’m glad you explained “nalezing.” At first I was afraid the sisters-in-arms were being ordered to stand down.

Couple of cavils:

“Better not be any spiders in here,” she whispered, thinking on the irony of being killed by a brown recluse in the middle of this.

I’m afraid you failed to describe Gray finding a crevice for cover before she was already in it.

As much as [Gray] hated the Corps . . .

When did that happen? It was my impression that Gray thought of the Corps as the last best hope, both for her and for humanity.

Illustration prompt: Sentinel wincing as he’s shielding Gray and taking the shrapnel.

@Olo said in SW in Gen V:

acting like a dbag on a campus full of supes is asking to get your dick dissolved.

Called it, btw.

@kisupure Everyone talks about recklessly destructive giants, but there’s a lot to be said for working with the authorities and monetizing an appreciative audience.

@kisupure Keep the spiders where they are, just add a sentence before it, describing how Gray found an arroyo in the dark.

@kisupure It’s the sheets.