[Mo] helps me gather up the rest and then escorts me out of her apartment building.
Sounds very dignified.
G/t kissing is special, and I’m glad we got this from Evie’s POV. Now do you get the appeal, Evie?
[Mo] helps me gather up the rest and then escorts me out of her apartment building.
Sounds very dignified.
G/t kissing is special, and I’m glad we got this from Evie’s POV. Now do you get the appeal, Evie?
@smolchlo Surely you’ve thought about it, tho. Give us the maximum girth you can take, and someone will do the math to see how big his pinky should be.
@littlest-lily Oh shit.
Putting the Diego development aside, I admire your narration of the fight very much. Every beat was earned, the dialogue (spoken and internal) was pitch-perfect, and best of all both Evie and Aiden were wholly sympathetic. They were both right, every step of the way.
The Brock exposition was terrifying and all-too-plausible.
I don’t know what to say about Aiden’s decision to bring Diego home, smdh.
@littlest-lily Yup, sympathy for the doggo (and the family) is there to heighten the villainy. And if she is rescued but restoration is impossible, she’ll have a companion. 
@miss-lillipants Some drunks see pink elephants, Diego sees nerd fairies.
@i-am-insane Okay, now that Shrek has been invoked twice, I have to link to my first male giant story, Accomodations, where one reader compared my protagonist to Shrek. It’s a first-person narrative from the giant’s perspective, so I don’t actually physically describe him anywhere, so I suppose the likeness must be in his personality.
As a long-time sifter of mainstream size content, I suppose a large part of the frustration with ugly/mean giants is that they immediately signal to the audience that they should in no way expect the giant(s) to be involved in any sexytimes or even romantic attraction. In fact, they seem to deliberately mock the idea that the audience might have such an expectation.
Traditionally, ogres eat people, and I don’t recall that ever coming up in the Shrek movies (I suppose you can see my personal frustration here).
Finally, Fiona was way hotter as an ogress. They didn’t even try to make her scary.
@littlest-lily It’s always frustrating to watch two people have an unnecessary fight because one or both of them misinterprets something the other has said or done. That wasn’t the case here. Some fights are necessary.
@smolchlo Calm down and rub some of that peanut sauce on your legs.
@littlest-lily But think of the revenge they could wreak, haunting first dates and job interviews!