@Jitensha
So worth it.
First off, I think the character’s backstories make the smut so much better. I can see the argument that the word balloons might block too much of the art, but really I prefer to have the dialogue to inform the characters’ thoughts and emotions.
Both these characters are also well-developed, and we can easily understand their motives, particularly the trials of loving someone who is quick-tempered and slow to forgive. I felt kind of whipsawed by Ramon’s “calling,” as I’m not at all sure how to relate to it. I’m just relieved it worked out (Fate?).
I really appreciate the window into Miami culture. For a resident of North America, my Spanish is woefully deficient. Everyone should be able to manage some basics, like giving directions or ordering food. I was recently passed over for a job because another candidate was bilingual, and it was absolutely the correct decision. The way you did the Spanish word balloons was much better than the standard practice of putting English dialogue inside <brackets> to indicate a different language.
Finally, this is just an excellent comic in terms of how the layout captures the motions and perspectives to tell this story. The colors really make it pop, too. Your years of experience in drawing size-fantasy has really paid off here.
Bien hecho, chiquita! 
Favorite panels:
Page 4, bottom right: Tells us everything we need to know about these two
Page 7, middle right: Her foot tucked under her ass, his thumb on her tit, both their faces
Page 8, bottom right: Him squatting, her desperate
Page 10, top left: Her hair flying up into his nostril
Page 15, bottom center: Her submissive expression and posture
Page 17, bottom left: Simply enchanting
Page 18, REJUVENATED!: I need to find Cuban espresso in the Seattle area
Page 19, top right: Enjoying the view? YES
Page 20, bottom left: An even better view
Page 20, bottom right: Her contorted posture and expression
Page 21, bottom left: My favorite sweetness
Page 22, bottom left: Worth the full price for this panel alone. Saved me a separate commission.
Page 23, top right: This is almost as hot as the preceding panel
Page 24, middle full: THROB
