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by Ernie Centofanti (aka Pacific1982)

by Ernie Centofanti (aka Pacific1982)

@kisupure

Oh, that was nice. His hands on her spine and the back of her head were the best. And of course dialogue is the best way to explore characters. I’m pretty sure no human ever gets used to a Nak’s voice.

“W-we’ve got forty minutes,” was the first thing she said. Gray could have smacked herself for how unsexy of an opener that was.

Honey, he’s here. You don’t need to close the sale.

“Spoken like a true corpsman.”

How would you know, Traitor?

Booker rumbled deep in his chest

Um, I don’t believe we’ve been introduced.

something told her that he hadn’t risked life and limb just to get her off

You never know.

gentle and mealy

Such a nasty thing to say.

She glanced up, suddenly sheepish and feeling very, very small now.

Aaand now you have your next illustration.

Gray was still busy swallowing the last of his cum as she went to sit beside him.

I guess now she can afford to swap her daily protein ration for a friday.

“Let’s do that again,” he said.

[Moonstruck Cher:] “Snap out of it!”

They are so doomed.

The lastest: Double-Teamed

Little Fairy

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by Ernie Centofanti (aka Pacific1982)

by Ernie Centofanti (aka Pacific1982)

@littlenichole

What a fucking bastard.

I really like how you hint at the (pre-shrinking) history between Andrew and Nia without giving us more than we need to know. Similarly, we get to imagine for ourselves the range of tortures and humiliations he inflicted upon her, which of course makes them worse.

“Before you always looked down on everyone…so we made it so you could never do it again…"

That “we” is highly intriguing…

On a technical note, I wonder if the narrative might flow better if all the action was in the past tense rather than the present. This could easily be just a matter of taste, but to me it would feel more organic and less like, say, the transcript of a roleplaying session. YMMV.

Also, “you’re” instead of “your.”

But yeah, he really played her desperation like a fiddle, and it was delicious.

@kisupure said in Petrichor - a novel in "open beta" - [M/f, minigiant, post-apocalyptic dystopia, slavery, military setting]:

What was he doing? His words were plain, but they were slippery, muddy, hiding things. Is this how he talked to Finch for a whole week? He made this seem so strangely urgent, like she was running out of time.

Like the pheromone, she can detect the foreboding but she cannot see the cause.

Where ya taking all those school girls? by Jessica Rae

So, hey, this is still functional.

Master
Tourist

Age: 36

Victim
Secretary

Age: 30

Race: Caucasian

Hair color: black

Hair style: long twin tails

New size: 3"

cause for shrinking: shrink potion in bath water

Duration
Ten years

Storage of the SW when not in use
in a bird cage

Clothes
doll dress

Special
SW will be abused in public
SW has to help capture and shrink other women

Things master will do frequently
feel SW up
spank SW with a ruler
improvise bondage
lick SW

Services the SW has to perform
act as living remote control

The End
SW escapes

Pencil Pusher by Steveoreno

@sloppy_amy More like rubbing one out.