Posts made by Olo

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Her Point of View by Lord Xarnor

That’s it. That’s the post.

Beautiful Captive by Mikester65

This grabbed my attention from the start. We got a lot of good detail about Kimberly’s captivity, and I always appreciate tinies dwelling on their distress and inconveniences. More importantly, you’ve established Kimberly’s voice, which is crucial for us to care about what happens to her.

Another revealing aspect is how your dialogue is only half the conversation; the eye directions, facial expressions, and body language are at least as important as what is said. Being introduced to Kimberly in the box adds an important dimension to her reactions in the club. It’s a common device, but you use it well.

Aaron seems a right bastard, so it will be dismaying to see Kimberly fall into his clutches. More rewarding will being see her go through the contortions to accommodate her new reality.

Passionate by Lord Xarnor

Just Plain Fun by Mikester65

@hentaihunter1 Naw, we just gotta stay one step ahead. Small fora like SWB and DD aren’t going to be shut down absent a change in the law.

Bacchus provides another reminder that textual smut is just as vulnerable to economic censorship as images and videos. Given that it’s more laborious to sort out “extreme” stories from the rest, the suits are likely to decide that a blanket ban is safer (for their bottom line).

Line 'Em Up by Lord Xarnor

The Glass Box by Mikester65

A Strange Couple and A Strange Couple (Remastered) by Lord Xarnor

The Captive by Mikester65

@the-big-g Good thing he’s not a drooler.

To Get His Attention by Lord Xarnor