@littlest-lily Just lovely! The dialogue is very convincing. Dr. Little took a big risk relying on the neuroblocker to prevent Aiden from learning that Evie didn’t know what was going to happen. I hope his arrogance continues.

@littlest-lily Just lovely! The dialogue is very convincing. Dr. Little took a big risk relying on the neuroblocker to prevent Aiden from learning that Evie didn’t know what was going to happen. I hope his arrogance continues.

@nikkiboi2 Everyone deserves to see themselves in size fantasy, and that means greater diversity in body shapes, skin tones, and facial types. This goes for giants, too.
Also, the squishy tinies last longer. 
@TakoAlice8 I’m not a mod, but I hope you’ll stick around until you can get this resolved. I’m having a hard time imagining what you might have done to warrant abandoning a site you hold dear.
@littlest-lily I really like the way you orient the reader to the action, enough detail to see what is going on but not so much as to slow everything down. Aiden’s interior narrative is complex and coherent, and Dr. Little’s reactions are plausible and not conveniently stupid. Aiden barely gets Evie out of there instead of being some sort of perfect action hero. He and Evie have a lot of discoveries ahead of them.
I didn’t get to see Ivy’s post before she deleted it, but extrapolating from the replies, whenever I “see” myself in a size fantasy, I appear much like I do in real life, which is a spitting image of Jason Momoa. 
@SmolChlo Are you “out” to your friends as a macrophile?
@littlest-lily I had expected Evie to join Aiden in the kitchen at some point, but I never made the Ratatouille connection. That’s a sweet image.
“You ready to be my little GPS?”
Aiden’s pick-up lines are improving.
“Aww, why do you keep them in a box? Poor things. You should display them if they’re important to you!”
Indeed.
@smolchlo Nothing better than a bottle POV looking up at a smug smirk just before the stopper goes in. 
@littlest-lily As someone who is desperately trying to reduce the amount of time he spends online, it was ironic to find myself during the first part of this chapter saying, “Evie needs the Internet.”
Both Evie and Aiden seem remarkably emotionally mature for their age(s). It’s both appropriate and adorable that Evie is the first to indulge in fantasizing about what a life together would be like. I’m struck that she already seems to have, if not abandoned, at least deferred the hope of getting restored to normal size.
Both of them need to acknowledge that Evie’s dependency on Aiden is a real obstacle to their relationship. I think it’s most analagous to her having suffered a disability. Some couples can accommodate that, some cannot.
@technomage Other guys worry about inconvenient erections, I worry people will notice my clenching fingers or my twitching tongue.