Aphrodisiac by Mikester65

@TakoAlice8 I’m not a mod, but I hope you’ll stick around until you can get this resolved. I’m having a hard time imagining what you might have done to warrant abandoning a site you hold dear.
@littlest-lily I really like the way you orient the reader to the action, enough detail to see what is going on but not so much as to slow everything down. Aiden’s interior narrative is complex and coherent, and Dr. Little’s reactions are plausible and not conveniently stupid. Aiden barely gets Evie out of there instead of being some sort of perfect action hero. He and Evie have a lot of discoveries ahead of them.
By Kitty Mocap. I get a real kick imagining her doing this in the mocap suit.
@littlest-lily I had expected Evie to join Aiden in the kitchen at some point, but I never made the Ratatouille connection. That’s a sweet image.
“You ready to be my little GPS?”
Aiden’s pick-up lines are improving.
“Aww, why do you keep them in a box? Poor things. You should display them if they’re important to you!”
Indeed.
@tiny-ivy In The Adventures of Baron Munchausen, the original script had a much longer scene with the giant court on the Moon.
@foreverlurk ASMR has mutated into many different things since it started over ten years ago, and one of those mutations is elaborate and creative roleplaying. That’s what I think we should be aiming for: a gratifying narrative that is performed by a single voice. Tingles and “triggers” are distractions from what should be a theatrical monologue.
@littlest-lily As someone who is desperately trying to reduce the amount of time he spends online, it was ironic to find myself during the first part of this chapter saying, “Evie needs the Internet.”
Both Evie and Aiden seem remarkably emotionally mature for their age(s). It’s both appropriate and adorable that Evie is the first to indulge in fantasizing about what a life together would be like. I’m struck that she already seems to have, if not abandoned, at least deferred the hope of getting restored to normal size.
Both of them need to acknowledge that Evie’s dependency on Aiden is a real obstacle to their relationship. I think it’s most analagous to her having suffered a disability. Some couples can accommodate that, some cannot.
@littlest-lily said:
I’m guessing folks here wouldn’t be interested in SM ASMR so I haven’t shared it haha
[raises a sheepish hand]