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@ghostwriter44 I finished the down draft this afternoon. Now for the revisions…

@kisupure said in Showing Her Her Place:

@olo Don’t forget the bits of string that they can get all tangled up in!

Like this?

@foreverlurk “I could just eat you up.”

@ghostwriter44 You and Gordon both.

@sloppy_amy Possibly. More cogently, it’s wherever I say it is.

@SmolChlo I have a number of effective traps to recommend.

@kisupure

Finch doesn’t seem too shocked that Wesson drugged Gray. She’s either dead inside or she’s playing a wicked angle.

@kisupure said in KP's Garbage Doodles (All M/ ):

That said, I think I made him a foot too tall here sob

Really? I was expecting him to be bigger.

@The-Big-G Yeah, Aborigen discussed that one too on his Substack. All F/m again. I went into a bit of rant in the comments.

@kisupure

Yeah, creek water makes for lousy lube.

Very elegant device to get Wesson in Rice’s crosshairs. Kudos!

As skilled and experienced as these two are, they’re in unfamiliar territory, and there’s no one they can ask for guidance. Rice, in particular, doesn’t seem to like not knowing the lay of the land.

I really like the way Gray has converted the Fear from a biochemical agent into a philosophical posture. It’d be ironic if her “resistance” to the pheromone gives her away to her fellow corpsmen at some point.

I still wonder how difficult it is for Anakim to suppress their scent. Very intrigued by the possibility that Gray is the first human he’s fucked that asked him not to suppress.

“I think you do, soldier,” he said.

Soldier. Not corpsman, soldier. I might swoon.

Fear on the battlefield was honest, but at camp it was the dirtiest weapon of all.

I’m still not relaxing around Finch.

@kisupure Do corpsmen have dogtags? I thought it was just tats. Either way, they’d look shiny hanging from my Rice’s cock.

@littlest-lily She knows, but she’s not interested.

@tiny-ivy Glad you’re liking it!

@kisupure

She glanced up, suddenly sheepish and feeling very, very small now.

Sounds like her story to me.

@SmolChlo Reading from a script without sounding like you’re reading from a script is hard. So I sound like I’m reading from a script.