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Tea Bath by Out-of-size

You-can-t-stir-the-coffee-while-I-take-a-bath by Out-of-size

@blss Depends. Some retailers have been scaling back their Black Friday operations due to negative publicity, but now they want to ramp back up and are having a hard time finding staff. You could be stuck in a fulfillment center for days or weeks.

@littlest-lily I really like the way you orient the reader to the action, enough detail to see what is going on but not so much as to slow everything down. Aiden’s interior narrative is complex and coherent, and Dr. Little’s reactions are plausible and not conveniently stupid. Aiden barely gets Evie out of there instead of being some sort of perfect action hero. He and Evie have a lot of discoveries ahead of them.

@Mrgoblinging7 “Kidnapping”? Looks like someone tied her up for a sacrifice.

@blss Oh, this is all online. I can’t do anything until you’re delivered to my doorstep.

@blss There are no mistakes, only “happy accidents.”

@blss Good luck with that. They listed your photo and you’re already in my shopping cart.

Coffe maker by Out-of-size

@Mrgoblinging7 My fingers can’t stop twitching and flexing.

Coffee bath by Out-of-size

@littlest-lily Just lovely! The dialogue is very convincing. Dr. Little took a big risk relying on the neuroblocker to prevent Aiden from learning that Evie didn’t know what was going to happen. I hope his arrogance continues.

This scene has lived rent-free in my head since I was eight years old.

@Mrgoblinging7 Just as revealing: the inescapable hint of triumph on the giant’s face.

@Mrgoblinging7 She could just be into mouthplay. Live to be slurped another day.