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    Posts made by Olo

    • RE: Petrichor - a novel in "open beta" - [M/f, minigiant, post-apocalyptic dystopia, slavery, military setting]

      @kisupure

      The priority lesson scene was marvelously well-done. The foreshadowing of the arrival of the dreaded brass effectively illustrated how the officer class is a vastly different tier of Corps society. Sipping tea while corporal punishment was administered was like something out of the Belgian Congo. Wesson was the true subject of the demonstration, as the transition from slave to overseer cannot be easy or painless. That dude must be really messed up. Mandatory transfer seems like it would be a mercy.

      As complete as the officers’ control over the corpsmen is, Wesson grabbing Gray and sniffing her undershirt still seemed like an excessive liberty. Couching the whole exchange amongst Gray’s fears that her treason would be discovered was a deft misdirect. If she’s clever, Gray can throw Wesson off the scent by masking the greater betrayal with the lesser.

      Gray imagining Rice observing the priority lesson was another good feint, as we didn’t know until the last moment who from Brown Toon was getting punished, and the reader was free to suspect it was Gray. If it was Gray up there with the chopping block, would Rice try to save her? Gray probably doesn’t think she deserves to hope for such a deliverance, but she obviously would anyway. Like I said, doomed.

      Finch is a puzzle. The standard trope is that she should be possessive of her special relationship with Wesson, but here she seems to want Gray to join her in trading favors, possibly so it won’t feel so dirty to her. Or maybe she’s just trying to earn the position of Most Cynical Bitch in the Toon.

      “Rice, what’s a pairing?”

      “You don’t wanna know.”

      Like hell we don’t.

      posted in Stories
      Olo
      Olo
    • Awe

      by Unknown Hand

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      posted in Artwork
      Olo
      Olo
    • She Clings

      by Unknown Hand

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      posted in Artwork
      Olo
      Olo
    • RE: KP's Garbage Doodles (All M/ )

      @kisupure

      She glanced up, suddenly sheepish and feeling very, very small now.

      Sounds like her story to me.

      posted in Artwork
      Olo
      Olo
    • RE: KP's Garbage Doodles (All M/ )

      @kisupure Largely because I’m not an artist myself, I imagined this one would be looking down at Gray from Rice’s POV. I’m pleased to have been surprised, not least because this way we can see that one of his thighs is wider than her entire ribcage.

      posted in Artwork
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      Olo
    • RE: KP's Garbage Doodles (All M/ )

      @kisupure Do corpsmen have dogtags? I thought it was just tats. Either way, they’d look shiny hanging from my Rice’s cock.

      posted in Artwork
      Olo
      Olo
    • Swapping Fluids

      by Unknown Hand

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      posted in Artwork
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      Olo
    • Have your cake and eat it too

      I never truly appreciated this expression until I held a tiny lady in my hand. :vore:

      posted in Size Fantasy Chat
      Olo
      Olo
    • Miss Peachbottom's Second Day

      by Unknown Hand

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      posted in Artwork
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      Olo
    • RE: Dealing With The Ex

      It occurs to me that there could be some ambiguity about who exactly the “ex” is in this scenario.

      posted in Artwork
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      Olo
    • Dealing With The Ex

      by Unknown Hand

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      posted in Artwork
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      Olo
    • I know you can't stop my tongue...

      …from pinning you to the roof of my mouth, but I need you to try. :vore:

      posted in Size Fantasy Chat
      Olo
      Olo
    • On Top of the World

      by Unknown Hand

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      Pie1.jpg

      posted in Artwork
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      Olo
    • RE: Petrichor - a novel in "open beta" - [M/f, minigiant, post-apocalyptic dystopia, slavery, military setting]

      @kisupure

      Fingering is underrated. It always scales up in my head.

      “I’ve been thinking about you a lot,” she murmured, the words coming out between little moans. Unfortunately, she realized too late that this made her sound hopelessly sentimental. He cocked a brow at her but didn’t even slow down.

      “You can’t?” There seemed to be a little enjoyment there at her expense.

      “You know what I meant.”

      I’m guessing there’s a draft where Gray’s first line is “I can’t stop thinking about you.”

      “You really are fuckin’ dense.”

      Someone oughta tell Rice that negging isn’t cool.

      I have some guesses about why Rice rucked her out on that little field trip, but the bottom line is that he wanted to show her why he hates fighting for the Algo.

      posted in Stories
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      Olo
    • Wide Open

      by Unknown Hand

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      posted in Artwork
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      Olo
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