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by Ernie Centofanti (aka Pacific1982)

@sloppy_amy Possibly. More cogently, it’s wherever I say it is.

@kisupure That reminds me, gotta pick up a laser pointer.

by Ernie Centofanti (aka Pacific1982)

by Ernie Centofanti (aka Pacific1982)

by Ernie Centofanti (aka Pacific1982)

@btbutcher Seems to me she’s left her outlet wide open.

by Ernie Centofanti (aka Pacific1982)

by Ernie Centofanti (aka Pacific1982)

@kisupure

Oh, that was nice. His hands on her spine and the back of her head were the best. And of course dialogue is the best way to explore characters. I’m pretty sure no human ever gets used to a Nak’s voice.

“W-we’ve got forty minutes,” was the first thing she said. Gray could have smacked herself for how unsexy of an opener that was.

Honey, he’s here. You don’t need to close the sale.

“Spoken like a true corpsman.”

How would you know, Traitor?

Booker rumbled deep in his chest

Um, I don’t believe we’ve been introduced.

something told her that he hadn’t risked life and limb just to get her off

You never know.

gentle and mealy

Such a nasty thing to say.

She glanced up, suddenly sheepish and feeling very, very small now.

Aaand now you have your next illustration.

Gray was still busy swallowing the last of his cum as she went to sit beside him.

I guess now she can afford to swap her daily protein ration for a friday.

“Let’s do that again,” he said.

[Moonstruck Cher:] “Snap out of it!”

They are so doomed.

The lastest: Double-Teamed

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by Ernie Centofanti (aka Pacific1982)

by Ernie Centofanti (aka Pacific1982)

@littlenichole

What a fucking bastard.

I really like how you hint at the (pre-shrinking) history between Andrew and Nia without giving us more than we need to know. Similarly, we get to imagine for ourselves the range of tortures and humiliations he inflicted upon her, which of course makes them worse.

“Before you always looked down on everyone…so we made it so you could never do it again…"

That “we” is highly intriguing…

On a technical note, I wonder if the narrative might flow better if all the action was in the past tense rather than the present. This could easily be just a matter of taste, but to me it would feel more organic and less like, say, the transcript of a roleplaying session. YMMV.

Also, “you’re” instead of “your.”

But yeah, he really played her desperation like a fiddle, and it was delicious.