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Extreme Passion by Lord Xarnor

@kisupure

@kisupure

“Feel like workin’ today?”

“Nah.”

“Kisu abides.”

Joy Ride by Mikester65

@kisupure Nothing drains a kink faster than having to be its ambassador.

Possible Upcoming Series by Lord Xarnor

@hentaihunter1 They can make the wildest shit out of paper clips. And leaving that lighter in there is just criminally negligent.

Desk Full of Girls by Mikester65

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Her Point of View by Lord Xarnor

That’s it. That’s the post.

Beautiful Captive by Mikester65

This grabbed my attention from the start. We got a lot of good detail about Kimberly’s captivity, and I always appreciate tinies dwelling on their distress and inconveniences. More importantly, you’ve established Kimberly’s voice, which is crucial for us to care about what happens to her.

Another revealing aspect is how your dialogue is only half the conversation; the eye directions, facial expressions, and body language are at least as important as what is said. Being introduced to Kimberly in the box adds an important dimension to her reactions in the club. It’s a common device, but you use it well.

Aaron seems a right bastard, so it will be dismaying to see Kimberly fall into his clutches. More rewarding will being see her go through the contortions to accommodate her new reality.