@kisupure said in Petrichor - a novel in "open beta" - [M/f, minigiant, post-apocalyptic dystopia, slavery, military setting]:
What was he doing? His words were plain, but they were slippery, muddy, hiding things. Is this how he talked to Finch for a whole week? He made this seem so strangely urgent, like she was running out of time.
Like the pheromone, she can detect the foreboding but she cannot see the cause.
@shrunkenlaura I want my little ladies to be able to dine like civilized people. Assuming I don’t have the capacity to simply shrink plates, glasses, or utensils, what do you suggest for dining paraphernalia?
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What a fucking bastard.
I really like how you hint at the (pre-shrinking) history between Andrew and Nia without giving us more than we need to know. Similarly, we get to imagine for ourselves the range of tortures and humiliations he inflicted upon her, which of course makes them worse.
“Before you always looked down on everyone…so we made it so you could never do it again…"
That “we” is highly intriguing…
On a technical note, I wonder if the narrative might flow better if all the action was in the past tense rather than the present. This could easily be just a matter of taste, but to me it would feel more organic and less like, say, the transcript of a roleplaying session. YMMV.
Also, “you’re” instead of “your.”
But yeah, he really played her desperation like a fiddle, and it was delicious.
@littlest-lily That’s why I always carry my phone in my front pocket. 
@dr-tol said in Casual encounters:
@olo what?.. I know, I know, my English is not that good X3
I just thought your post was stupendous. I wish I could borrow your toy.
Oh, that was nice. His hands on her spine and the back of her head were the best. And of course dialogue is the best way to explore characters. I’m pretty sure no human ever gets used to a Nak’s voice.
“W-we’ve got forty minutes,” was the first thing she said. Gray could have smacked herself for how unsexy of an opener that was.
Honey, he’s here. You don’t need to close the sale.
“Spoken like a true corpsman.”
How would you know, Traitor?
Booker rumbled deep in his chest
Um, I don’t believe we’ve been introduced.
something told her that he hadn’t risked life and limb just to get her off
You never know.
gentle and mealy
Such a nasty thing to say.
She glanced up, suddenly sheepish and feeling very, very small now.
Aaand now you have your next illustration.
Gray was still busy swallowing the last of his cum as she went to sit beside him.
I guess now she can afford to swap her daily protein ration for a friday.
“Let’s do that again,” he said.
[Moonstruck Cher:] “Snap out of it!”
They are so doomed.
Here’s a follow-up question: Of the women in your life that you’d like to see tiny, how many do you imagine would prefer/embrace a shrunken life, and how many do you imagine would protest/resist?
That’s been a common exercise for me as I get to know new people; does X have a personality best-suited to becoming giant or tiny, or should they remain normal-sized but in the presence of a giant or a tiny me? Endlessly diverting…
@Nyx said in Giant Bane:
Tiny female dominatrix and giant guy? That’s my fetish
You’ll like her, and the episode.
@hentaihunter1 Not at all, I just wanted to clarify that it’s not my work. 
Fingering is underrated. It always scales up in my head.
“I’ve been thinking about you a lot,” she murmured, the words coming out between little moans. Unfortunately, she realized too late that this made her sound hopelessly sentimental. He cocked a brow at her but didn’t even slow down.
“You can’t?” There seemed to be a little enjoyment there at her expense.
“You know what I meant.”
I’m guessing there’s a draft where Gray’s first line is “I can’t stop thinking about you.”
“You really are fuckin’ dense.”
Someone oughta tell Rice that negging isn’t cool.
I have some guesses about why Rice rucked her out on that little field trip, but the bottom line is that he wanted to show her why he hates fighting for the Algo.
@tiny-ivy said in People you'd love to shrink in your lives!:
I’d find it hard to ask a tiny for anything because the tiny would probably just say yes out of fear, and that just makes me feel gross.
I’ve been involved in more than one online discussion about whether tinies can give meaningful consent.
