Best posts made by Olo

@sloppy_amy She’s the housekeeper. At the beginning of the movie she’s dressed more modestly, but when her employer becomes a celebrity as “the Incredible Shrinking Woman,” she lets the wilder side of her personality take over.

@SmolChlo Never get tired of sniffing your her hair.

@ilikehell I agree. Giant eyes and faces complete the story.

@kisupure

Yeah, creek water makes for lousy lube.

Very elegant device to get Wesson in Rice’s crosshairs. Kudos!

As skilled and experienced as these two are, they’re in unfamiliar territory, and there’s no one they can ask for guidance. Rice, in particular, doesn’t seem to like not knowing the lay of the land.

I really like the way Gray has converted the Fear from a biochemical agent into a philosophical posture. It’d be ironic if her “resistance” to the pheromone gives her away to her fellow corpsmen at some point.

I still wonder how difficult it is for Anakim to suppress their scent. Very intrigued by the possibility that Gray is the first human he’s fucked that asked him not to suppress.

“I think you do, soldier,” he said.

Soldier. Not corpsman, soldier. I might swoon.

Fear on the battlefield was honest, but at camp it was the dirtiest weapon of all.

I’m still not relaxing around Finch.

@biggrumpy

• Give her time to get acclimated to your voice, your touch, and your smell.

• Let her hear you coming, and let her put herself into your hand.

• Give her a new name, and reward her when she responds to it.

@SmolChlo To hell with hibernating.

@phoenix09 Thanks! That drip is indeed what sells this one.

@tiny-ivy Glad you’re liking it!

@nyx Well, that would make a for a rather short story.

@SmolChlo

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@kisupure

New title: Soylent Gray

“Captain Rhyd Wesson, it’s time you learned what retraining is.”

So is the implication here that Wesson is about to be inducted into the mysteries of the Corps, and that by the time he sees Gray off he knows that non-officer corpsmen (along with the rest of humanity) are just livestock? That’s some red pill.

Either way, Wesson is an irredeemable shit. Conflating treason against the Corps with betraying him personally is pathetic, and sending Gray off to get mulched is as cold as it gets.

Gray goes through a lot and learns a lot in this chapter, but you did well to make us feel each blow as it lands. The death of the Corps cuts the deepest. Gray’s body might still be intact, but her spirit has been puréed.

@giant-me A puppy dog could do horrific things to a three-inch-tall woman.

@TheReducer Great ideas, sir. We desperately need permanent subforums for Recommendations and Requests.

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