@Olo said in SW in Gen V:
acting like a dbag on a campus full of supes is asking to get your dick dissolved.
Called it, btw.
@Olo said in SW in Gen V:
acting like a dbag on a campus full of supes is asking to get your dick dissolved.
Called it, btw.
@kisupure Keep the spiders where they are, just add a sentence before it, describing how Gray found an arroyo in the dark.
@kisupure Everyone talks about recklessly destructive giants, but there’s a lot to be said for working with the authorities and monetizing an appreciative audience.
@kisupure 9th-years. Oh yeah, that makes sense. Should be some snappy jargon to refer to “graduates.”
Regarding Gray and her “hatred” of the Corps, it’s perfectly reasonable for her to resent the Corps as its regulations impinge more and more upon her interest in the sentinel. It’ll be totally subconscious, tho.
So this forum doesn’t have a [SPOILER] format to hide text, so I’ll just type a bit more so anything I reveal will be too far down for it to show up on the preview sidebar.
The only Sizey scene was Emma shrinking part way out of her clothes after Sam ridicules her. She doesn’t purge to shrink, so the implication is that she might be able to control her size by inducing certain emotions. We’ll have to wait until Season 2 to learn more.
@kisupure Nice misdirect with the opening Manual excerpt. I was partially expecting Gray to be promoted.
Also surprised that Gray reported the sentinel’s calling off the pursuit. It doesn’t incriminate her in any way, but it does put a spotlight on his loyalties.
Did . . . Gray rub one out after her stroll and before her nap?
@sloppy_amy You’re neglecting the possibility that he’s the swag.
@foreverlurk said:
I must say I like that shrinking method a hundred times more.
I’m not fond of the purging either, but I’d rather watch that than watch someone make Emma feel like shit in order for her to shrink.
@kisupure said in Petrichor - a novel in "open beta" - [M/f, minigiant, post-apocalyptic dystopia, slavery, military setting]:
The enlisted/officer divide is a staple of military fiction, but what was once rooted in static social classes became more permeable with the rise of “professional” soldiers and recruitment. With the Disruption sending us back to serfdom, however, a battlefield commission is less a promotion than an ennobling.
Corpsmen are still enslaved, as Finch’s lack of good choices demonstrates. Captains leading armed bondsmen aren’t quite overseers or feudal lords, but the 'Naks and harsh environment seem to provide the rest of the discipline necessary to keep the corpsmen loyal. Until now, that is.
Still, Gray suddenly didn’t like how [Wesson] was taking up space.
Not as much space as some do…
animal impiety
Nice.
As far as I can tell, you haven’t disturbed the conventional wisdom that there are no female Anakim, but you have allowed that it might not be possible to engineer an humanoid effectively for combat without giving it a libido. I don’t suppose I have to remind you how non-neutered adult human males have historically behaved in prolonged single-sex environments.
What does fear pheromone smell like to other 'Naks? Pleasant? Noxious? Undetectable? Is suppression against orders?
@Nyx Commission an array of different sizes (and ethnicities, and cut/uncut…).
@kisupure said in Petrichor - a novel in "open beta" - [M/f, minigiant, post-apocalyptic dystopia, slavery, military setting]:
What was he doing? His words were plain, but they were slippery, muddy, hiding things. Is this how he talked to Finch for a whole week? He made this seem so strangely urgent, like she was running out of time.
Like the pheromone, she can detect the foreboding but she cannot see the cause.
@giant_feelings said in Hello Little One:
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Thanks! The Tumblr is empty now. Do you know of a current account for them somewhere?