@littlest-lily Just lovely! The dialogue is very convincing. Dr. Little took a big risk relying on the neuroblocker to prevent Aiden from learning that Evie didn’t know what was going to happen. I hope his arrogance continues.

@littlest-lily Just lovely! The dialogue is very convincing. Dr. Little took a big risk relying on the neuroblocker to prevent Aiden from learning that Evie didn’t know what was going to happen. I hope his arrogance continues.

I never truly appreciated this expression until I held a tiny lady in my hand. 
@littlest-lily I really like the way you orient the reader to the action, enough detail to see what is going on but not so much as to slow everything down. Aiden’s interior narrative is complex and coherent, and Dr. Little’s reactions are plausible and not conveniently stupid. Aiden barely gets Evie out of there instead of being some sort of perfect action hero. He and Evie have a lot of discoveries ahead of them.
@Aborigen Impish question: Are you gonna do a M/m version over on Coiled Fist?
@littlemejeanine I love when tinies get taunted.


@littlest-lily I had expected Evie to join Aiden in the kitchen at some point, but I never made the Ratatouille connection. That’s a sweet image.
“You ready to be my little GPS?”
Aiden’s pick-up lines are improving.
“Aww, why do you keep them in a box? Poor things. You should display them if they’re important to you!”
Indeed.
You know the old adage: you never really get to know a person until they’ve been shrunken small enough to hold in your hand. I am therefore more interested in seeing a variety of different women dwindle out of their clothes and come to grips with having to navigate a world of giants. Young or old, skinny or fat, timid or tough; it’s a new discovery each time.
As to specific sizes, I answered this before.
Nevertheless, if you paraded a wide cross-section of women in front of me and said, “Pick one and we’ll shrink her for you,” I’d probably lean toward a MILF type, old enough to have acquired some confidence and dignity, only to lose it as she became my pet. I would also be strongly tempted by a thick ass and thighs that I could gnaw on.
@littlest-lily As someone who is desperately trying to reduce the amount of time he spends online, it was ironic to find myself during the first part of this chapter saying, “Evie needs the Internet.”
Both Evie and Aiden seem remarkably emotionally mature for their age(s). It’s both appropriate and adorable that Evie is the first to indulge in fantasizing about what a life together would be like. I’m struck that she already seems to have, if not abandoned, at least deferred the hope of getting restored to normal size.
Both of them need to acknowledge that Evie’s dependency on Aiden is a real obstacle to their relationship. I think it’s most analagous to her having suffered a disability. Some couples can accommodate that, some cannot.
@SmolChlo Don’t answer this if you’re not comfortable with it, but I’m curious how much of a role foot odor plays in your fetish. Apparently, the apocrine sweat glands in the soles evoke the same neurochemical reaction that is generated by smelling more conventional erogenous zones.